Give it a read and let me know what you think. Any feedback—stuff you think could be added, changed, improved, or whatever—is very much welcome.
Note: The format isn’t supposed to be perfect for publishing, just decent enough to make it easy to read as a .pdf for now. So don’t worry too much if I’ve broken some of the best-practice rules for how a manuscript should be formatted; simply enjoy. 🙂
You’re also welcome to check out my other short story, Outside, if you haven’t read that yet: